Tuesday, September 15, 2015
Sunday, September 13, 2015
Friday, September 11, 2015
Cory Carrilio Tier 3
Hey James, this is an idea for an environment that I have, still very rough but I want to take this further and I was wondering what I could do to make fast thumbnails stronger.
Thanks,
Cory
Thanks,
Cory
Thursday, September 10, 2015
Albert Lin -Tier 4 ($50)
Yigit Isik - Tier 2
Hi James,
Thanks for last month's feedback.
Here are the pieces for this month. One is a scene from the riots in Turkey the summer of 2013 and the other is a scene depicting the alien interference on the construction of ancient Egyptian civilization.
Thanks in advance!
Yigit Isik
Thanks for last month's feedback.
Here are the pieces for this month. One is a scene from the riots in Turkey the summer of 2013 and the other is a scene depicting the alien interference on the construction of ancient Egyptian civilization.
Thanks in advance!
Yigit Isik
Aaron Wilkerson - Tier 2
An old one I'd like to call finished.
For this second one I was going for a Dead Space kind of vibe with a broken hull and I was planning to put an astronaut floating somewhere. The composition has problems.
Thanks James!
Jenny Tan - Tier 4 ($50)
Hey James
Here's my September piece, it's actually something I whipped up for a different sort of mentorship. I'll have an environment to submit next month. I had a question about homework/exercises... when we do receive it, would it be possible to post up maybe a compilation of our progress for you to have a quick eyeball? I don't think you'd have time to give us a critique on it, but just overall passing remarks on whether we've picked up on any bad habits/ weaknesses/ strengths etc.
Cheers
Jen
Kim Petersen – Tier 4
Here's my image for september. Trying out a more graphical approach (with 3D base). Looking forward hearing your thoughts about how I can push this further.
Higher res here: Kim Petersen September
/Kim
Higher res here: Kim Petersen September
/Kim
Andreas Kjær-Jensen - Tier 4 (50$)
Hello James, here is my piece for September. I decided to practice som prop design, still not very experienced with it though so I thought it would be great to get some feeedback on that specific topic. This is a weapon design I did for practice. I used Modo for modelling, Keyshot for base render and spent several hours in Photoshop touching it up and adding texture.
Can't wait to get my feedback and thanks for the great stuff from the last months!
Can't wait to get my feedback and thanks for the great stuff from the last months!
Wednesday, September 9, 2015
Lucas Örström - Tier 4
Hi James. This is a pirate shipwreck city. I want this to have cinematic feel and lighting quality but I'm not there. Thanks!
Joseph Diaz (Tier 4)
Dear James,
Here is my submission. Please, feel free to change the image and composition as much as you want. Thank you in advance for all your help.
Here is my submission. Please, feel free to change the image and composition as much as you want. Thank you in advance for all your help.
Dennis Houwers - Tier3
Hello. Here's my work for this month. I like the scene sofar but would like to know how to make it more interesting and have a better overall read and better focal points. Some tips on lightning and image optimizing (contrast, levels etc) are very welcome too!
Thanks, and looking forward to the overpaints!
Thanks, and looking forward to the overpaints!
Tuesday, September 8, 2015
Justin Donaldson - $10
so we have yet another unfinished Egyptian piece. I can't wait to hear back (and I already have some changes I would make to this based on what I saw last time, but here we go!).
Thanks so much!
Thanks so much!
Monday, September 7, 2015
Sunday, September 6, 2015
Wednesday, September 2, 2015
Welcome!
Hello Everyone,
And welcome to the September session of Critique! We ask you to post your work here for review, and we have just a few notes for you:
- In the title, please include your Name, & Patreon Tier Group #
- Please only submit the maximum allowed pieces, depending on your tier group.
- Please submit all submissions no later than: 11:59pm Sept. 10th 2015, Pacific Time
Thank you again, and we're really looking forward to the group!
Thanks!!
And welcome to the September session of Critique! We ask you to post your work here for review, and we have just a few notes for you:
- In the title, please include your Name, & Patreon Tier Group #
- Please only submit the maximum allowed pieces, depending on your tier group.
- Please submit all submissions no later than: 11:59pm Sept. 10th 2015, Pacific Time
Thank you again, and we're really looking forward to the group!
Thanks!!
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