Alex Garmash_(Tier 2)

Hi James here my two works, not a piece of a cake yet, but I reckon your advice will help me to improve it.

Fighting with values:)

The same works but in lines if it helps somehow.

Welcome!

Hello Everyone,

And welcome to the September session of Critique! We ask you to post your work here for review, and we have just a few notes for you:

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